This guy wants 100 chapters of MC doing sword swings and exercises, lol. Time skips there because nothing of note happened during those years. I admit I’m not a big fan of time skips, and they’re often a sign of bad writing, but I don’t have a problem with how they’re being used here, though the transitions could be a bit smoother. Also, Why do we need buildup for some rando being a jealous bitch? I don’t understand any of your opinions.
Im out, the story is sh*t, wtf with time skip and the girl already call him senior brother, not to mention that other guy coming to him to warn about he being close with the girl, too sudden, too quick, no build up, just no.
glamdak
dude this is going way too fast its not gonna have a timeskip in so long now
Narf
This guy wants 100 chapters of MC doing sword swings and exercises, lol. Time skips there because nothing of note happened during those years. I admit I’m not a big fan of time skips, and they’re often a sign of bad writing, but I don’t have a problem with how they’re being used here, though the transitions could be a bit smoother. Also, Why do we need buildup for some rando being a jealous bitch? I don’t understand any of your opinions.
Field
Im out, the story is sh*t, wtf with time skip and the girl already call him senior brother, not to mention that other guy coming to him to warn about he being close with the girl, too sudden, too quick, no build up, just no.